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A framework by Ann Handley

Ann Handley's Ugly First Draft

Ann Handley's ugly first draft splits writing into two jobs that most people try to do at once. First you get the thoughts out of your head without judging them. Then, separately, you shape what came out for one specific reader. Handley wrote Everybody Writes, and her diagnosis of why marketers freeze at the blank page is not that they lack talent. It is that they are trying to produce something good on the first pass.

Why the blank page is not a talent problem

Writing is thinking.

If the thinking is unfinished, the draft will be too. That is not a reason to stall, it is the reason to write badly first.

Ann Handley Think with Google Watch at 00:01

The framework

Two passes, never one

Handley starts from an observation about where the fear comes from. Nearly everyone she talks to carries something left over from school, a belief that they are bad at spelling or terrible at grammar and therefore not a writer. Her position is that none of that has anything to do with the ability to write.

the ability to write is to think about what it is that you want to say and frame it in a way that's interesting for somebody else
Handley, on what writing actually is Watch at 02:28

Two jobs are hiding in that sentence. Working out what you want to say is thinking. Framing it so it lands is craft. Attempt them simultaneously and each one blocks the other, which is what a blank page actually is.

So the first pass has no quality bar at all:

It's really just about sitting down and getting thoughts out of your head, starting somewhere.
Handley, on the first pass Watch at 06:00

The second pass is where the reader arrives, and Handley is specific about who that is. Not an audience. Not a segment. One person.

How to apply it

How do you write an ugly first draft?

Six rules, split across the two passes.

Pass 1 · Get it out

  1. 1

    Give yourself permission to write badly.

    Not as a motivational trick. The pressure to produce something good is the specific thing stopping the words, so removing it is the mechanism.

  2. 2

    Write before the day gets hold of you.

    Handley keeps a daily journal first thing, ahead of the laptop and the phone, so the drafting happens before her attention has been claimed by everyone else.

  3. 3

    Do not edit while you draft.

    Fixing a sentence pulls you back into craft mode and stops the thinking. Leave the mess; it is evidence the pass is working.

before my day is hijacked by other thoughts and other people
Handley, on writing first thing Watch at 06:21

Pass 2 · Shape it for one person

  1. 4

    Name the one reader before you edit a line.

    A real person, not a persona document. Writing to an audience produces the hedged, committee-shaped prose that nobody finishes.

  2. 5

    Decide what you want that person to do differently.

    Handley's framing is behavior or mindset. If you cannot say which one you are after, the draft has no target to be edited toward.

  3. 6

    Cut back to what is useful to them, not impressive to you.

    The edit is where the reader's interest outranks yours. Everything that survives should be there because it helps that one person.

for one single reader at one time
Handley, on who you are writing to Watch at 02:35

Boundary conditions

When does the ugly first draft fail?

Works best when

  • You know the material but cannot start
  • The piece has one reader you can actually picture
  • You control the schedule enough to separate the passes

Fails when

  • The ugly draft is never edited, and ships as-is
  • You have no reader in mind, so pass two has no criteria
  • The real gap is research, which no amount of drafting fills

The first failure is the common one, and it is worth being blunt about. An ugly first draft is licensed to be bad because something happens to it afterward. Skip the second pass and you have not applied the method, you have just published a journal entry.

The third boundary is where Handley and Eugene Schwartz agree completely. Schwartz's 33.33 method also removes the obligation to produce, and also sits downstream of two weeks of reading. Both treat the blank page as a pressure problem and the quality of the finished piece as a preparation problem. Neither treats drafting as the place where you figure out what you know.

The sources

Where Handley discusses this

05:43
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Think with Google · Ann Handley on the secrets of great marketing writing

The Ugly First Draft

"the idea of an ugly first draft is so critical for us to embrace."
02:28
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Think with Google · Ann Handley on the secrets of great marketing writing

What the Ability to Write Actually Is

"frame it in a way that's interesting for somebody else."
02:35
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Think with Google · Ann Handley on the secrets of great marketing writing

Writing to One Person

"for one single reader at one time, not an audience, not your teacher."
12:01
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Think with Google · Ann Handley on the secrets of great marketing writing

Writing Is Thinking

"Writing is thinking. It's how we understand something completely."

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